Monday, January 17, 2011

Small Stone #17 (aros)

Small sliding steps
tentative
listening for any 
groan or creak 
that means 
breaking thru.

4 comments:

  1. In a metaphysical sense, of course - a breakthrough is a great thing! Although usually unexpected, and perhaps only in retrospect.

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  2. Yes. It was deliberately written to describe both the real trip across the frozen creek and a more metaphoric place that I seem to be in my life.

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  3. This piece is comforting and inspiring. I love it ten different ways.

    JP

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